Peer Commentary #2

In Carlos commentary he definitely shows what his main point is. He makes it very clear but I feel that there was a lot more things that could have been added to his work. For example, he could make his main idea expand more by describing the events in more detail and giving his audience more information. Also, it would be better if he had links where he got the North Korea quote, so we could see more of the commentary. I agree with his point of view but like I said, it would be better if we where provided with the  links where we could find information about the riots and protests and more importantly where to see that other countries are supporting these protests going on. He makes a good argument about the jury and the fact that 9 out of 12 where white men and it really gives us the idea of how white privilege works. Overall I think it was a really good commentary.