Blog Critique

 The start of this post is really good and intriguing. I completely agree that there should be more control in our gun regulations. The article is interesting but it could also use a lot of sources. The part where is talking about the amount of school shootings this year would have credibility if we could see a source. Also include what were Obama's plans to prevent gun violence. Including the most recent school shooting in your article was a good idea since it was something shown on national news and easy to make a connection to it but I feel that it focused only on that event and nothing else. By the middle of the article the point was kind of lost and it turned into a story about a school shooting and not so much about gun control. Also there's a lot of grammatical errors that makes it a bit hard to read. Other than that I started out okay but it could have used a couple of more sources and more explanation and focus of the  main point.